Wow, that was amazing. Great wording and the flow was just right.
I loved it.

WOW!!
That was absolutely beautiful. I couldn't stop reading once I began. Great write my friend. I wouldn't change a thing.

Another great poem. The flow was excellent. Good job 5/5

Another wonderful poem. I've added you to my favorites list, Jennie :-)

If this poem doesn't move you ....
you are dead!!! Straight on my fav. list
Adel now you..... i feel so humble....
fantastic write

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.

PS. Plz rate and comment on some of my poems and I'll return the favour.

Wow...I really enjoyed reading it. Good job...Keep on writing!...

This an amazing poem, all your poetry seems to flow very well, i loved the ideas in this poem it was so moving. great word choice and vocabulary.

Hi again - I really liked this poem too. I wouldn't say that it was "sweet" or a "love poem"... I would say that its about lust and erotica that is forbidden. A burning desire that cant be quenched and that cant be refused but that is regretted in time? Is that right? Well - that is what I got out of it. Great wording. The rhythm made it feel like a quickening heart beat.

Great piece

Mo
xx

The flow was not your best and the message could be stronger, but still a wonderful. You are a great read and I am enjoying your work.

I read your latest poem and just had to see what else you have written. This is absolutely devine! You truely are a great writer. Definately adding you to my fav list.

A beautiful poem with and ending to die for. An ending that puts the icing on the cake. So far this poem has the best ending of all I've read so far. I started at the top.5/5

Stanza 3 wow 5/5