Awh this is sad but amazing writing! i love it! keep up the good work.

Wow, your poem is amazing! The words just flowed so well together! 5/5

I love this poem!
It's brilliant! Loved the flow to it,
keep writtin
xx

Wow. Spectacular.
It was amazing, yet truly heartbreaking to read. I hope it's not true. The flow was flawless, emotions were strong, and the word usage was great.

"So I depended on your touch
Attached me to your smile.
Forgot about the pain inside
At least for just awhile.
Then once again i took my role
As girl with broken heart.
The fairytale came to an end
My dream love torn apart."

^ My favorite lines, so original. Hun, this was a fabulous poem! Keep writing! 5/5

Stephanie Lynn .+.