Wow... spectacular... which is expected.. every poem of yours ive ever read.. and ive read quite a few turn out truely wonderful...

the despcription is expressed nicely and along with the perfect flow and nice rhymes the whole thing is just a beautiful poem... wonderful job.. keep it up!!

Great poem, which is written perfectly, i love it, a 5/5 from me and also as a senior member of P&Q i voted this poem for weekly contest, cause it is so great...........

Wow i liked that alot!! it was excellent. well done hun

much love and many kisses,
bex

Wow truly talented are u, huh?
yet another tremendously spectacular poem from you, i congrad u on such a out of this world poem, if only i could rite that good!:)

Wow. wowowoowwow. fantastic poem! i really felt it! that sounds stupid i know... i dont mean in the annoying ' i really relate' way, i mean i can hear it, feel it, all the emotion, its just wow. it feels like waking up.

Wow. I love this. It is just... incredible. I loved the word use, it was very intricately written, and especially well for a forced poem.
The only slight abrasion in the rhyme was this:

But the darkness is still very raw,

I think you could make it the same amount of syllables as the other lines and it would allow the reader to get into it better.

Well written. I really enjoyed this!
5/5
~Stephen White

Oh my gosh.. your poems are always amazing... and this one is not different... you have a way with words.. flawless flow and very unique.. keep it up :D

This is an amazing poem. The amount of description you used created great imagery, the flow was perfect, which made it really easy to read, and the wide use of vocabulary always makes a poem better. This is a really awesome poem, unique as well.. Great job.
Thanks for commenting on my poem. =]

5/5 For this.

Tammie

I think you did great.

Another incredible one. just keep them coming. in it , it kind of sounds like a cult of a sort, is it?

-sin

The human race was in shambles,
Friends and family all closing their eyes,
Leaving the needy in times of despair,
Humanity on the verge of demise.

this is such a powerful verse. i really love it. hey if you want you could check out some of my poetry. great work once again. 5/5

Wow. let me re-do that, WOW. I cannot even begin to express how astounding this poem is. you clearly have talent, you have a way with words. your advanced vocab is very impressing, the flow, perfect. I have not yet seen a day where i am disappointed with one of your poems.
"Injecting their hate in my skin"
Favorite line, plus the last stanza, beautiful.
excellent, excellent job.
5/5 for sure
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