All that i need

by Desray   Feb 25, 2007


You mean the world to me
it isn't really hard to see
But its very hard to explain
Pure love is what I have to gain

Just the way you make me feel
I realize I have got something real
It so much powerful when we met
With u and God I am complete

My heart skips a beat or two when you are near
With you in my heart I have nothing to fear
I give you my heart, for you to hold
Forever and ever until we grow old

Yes it is true
I wana grow old wit you
With God's love and yours
Well open up all the doors,
doors to eternity
With you him and me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    Beautiful poem!! It sounds like a younger me i used to write like this lol If u wanna read some of my old poems there kinda like this... Good Job i tell u love this guy alot ;) 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ItsYou ItsAlwaysBeenYou

    I loved the poem and the message..here is my critique:
    I think you should change
    "It so much powerful when we met
    With u and God I am complete"
    to
    "It was so powerful when we met
    With you and God I am complete"
    It flows a little better in my opinion :)
    great poem tho, i gave it 5/5
    ~kayli

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    I love it!! it's nice to see that a love poem can bring in god. that you can love a man and a god forever and that they can coexist. amazing! <3

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