by AGirlWorthFightingFor Feb 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
love is
Yes, I know that things will change, |
by sibyllene
I really like how this is so conversational, and yet still poetic. I think people often worry too much about making things sound "like a poem..." and then they end up just sounding forced, where this was very natural. I also this this poem ended nicely - a good slowing down to a concise ending. |