by Dawn Manna Feb 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I remember the way it used to be |
by Lisa
Nice poem |
Ok poem, but it seems that it is too forced. It would flow better were the second line a sylable shorter. The over all meaning is well expressed, and i think it was a good but unoriginal topic. |
Mmm i noticed too that the rhyming was funny. . . Its not that it was wrong but you knida got into a rhythm and then it changed. . |
by Cella Bella
The rhyming was a liittle off, unless you meant it to be that way, but it was a nice poem. Good flow. 5/5 |