Joeee. I think you mean "Old-English" not modern...o_O. Anyways this was really good. I only tried something like this once and it didn't work out so well. Anyways very heartfelt write. I loved it. Oh...and...

"And let me lay my lips upon thy"

^^ I don't know exactly how to use old-english but in that sentence, I believe "thy" should be "thee" or "ye" or one of those. I'm not exactly sure. =/ I just know its not "thy"...lol. Anyways yeah great poem!! 5/5

-` Liz

Lol, a few minor mistakes, but other than that, a good job. I like talking in this manner, makes me seem well fasioned and older. Nice work. 4.5/5

Very nice Joe. The flow and word choice was excellent. Good job 5/5

I liked it, i couldn't find anything wrong like other people....haha....well 5/5...ive tried writting a poem like in that old language, but i couldnt so extra good job. its not as easy as it looks

Beautiful!!!

God bless u

Hmm...it was ok. Honestly I had to keep stopping and starting as the flow dipped in places, it may have been the old English that distracted me.
So apart from the creative use of old English the wording was pretty ordinary really, not many intense or detailed descriptions.
Ok so it was sweet, and a genuine love poem, indeed. And if a blanket of old romantic language is what you want this is the poem. But it didn't quite do it for me, sorry.