Ripped apart

by Kaila   Feb 26, 2007


It eats away at me
Day in and day out
I can't do anything about it
I can't even shout

For it's my fault I'm like this
There's nothing I can do
I can't just push a button
To stop loving you

You act like you love me
And I thought your feelings were true
But now I know that you never did
And I'm left here feeling blue

I feel like a knife
just stabbed me in my chest
you said you were different
but your just like the rest

You lied
Just to get to my heart
And when I gave it to you
You ripped it apart

You stomped on it
Torn on it
Ripped it apart
But it was already broken from the very start

See I've been through so much pain now
I'm done with it all
I just wish someone would catch me
Before I fall

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sad Eyes Kels

    I Know How You Feel,

    Some Poeple Say You Can Never Mend A Broken Heart But I Never Belived Mine Has Been Broken But I'm Fine. Well I Wish You Luck Even If I Don't Know You Or You have Never Had Your Heart Broken

    -Kels

  • 17 years ago

    by Curry

    This one is one of my favorites<3
    never stop writing poems because you are an amazing writer!

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    5/5! that is such an excellent but sooo sad poem. I feel like i have been there. Your poem is perfect. I loved every stanza. this one is my all-time fav>
    "I feel like a knife
    just stabbed me in my chest
    you said you were different
    but your just like the rest"

    keep up your good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    This is officially my favorite of all of your poems! it's perfect! the rhyming and the flow was perfect, and i love what you wrote about! i really want to tell you my favorite part, but i can't choose anything... i'll tell you one of them though...
    "I can't just push a button
    To stop loving you"
    i love that part... i wish it was true, i would've pushed that button a long time ago.
    anyways... i love this poem. you're a very talented writer!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    "It eats away at me
    Day in and day out
    I can't do anything about it
    I can't even shout"

    To me this was kind of a strange line, I wasn't a big fan of the line.

    ''I can't just push a button
    To stop loving you''

    I loved this one, however. The poem overall was awesome and I really loved it! I can totally relate. 5/5! =]

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