This is a very interesting poem but the rhyme scheme kept changing from each verse to the next it made it very hard to follow, besides that it wasn't bad though.

Pretty good. the flow was a bit lacking. but it had emotion. nice job. -beav

Very nicely written great poem, keep up the great work, you are truly talanted....5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

Hey i love the flow of this poem. . .The rhyming sounds natural, but i did notice it chnaged for a stanza. . . but this doesn't really effect the overal effect ^_^

Nice write

laura
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I will catch you, if you want. lol. this poem just reached out and grabed me, the emotion was fab-u-lous.

5/5 david

Hey, not bad! i liek this one too!

''I can't just push a button
To stop loving you''

I love those lines!
So beautifully written.
I thought at times the flow was kind of off, but apart from that, you did a wonderful job with this.

"It eats away at me
Day in and day out
I can't do anything about it
I can't even shout"

To me this was kind of a strange line, I wasn't a big fan of the line.

''I can't just push a button
To stop loving you''

I loved this one, however. The poem overall was awesome and I really loved it! I can totally relate. 5/5! =]

This is officially my favorite of all of your poems! it's perfect! the rhyming and the flow was perfect, and i love what you wrote about! i really want to tell you my favorite part, but i can't choose anything... i'll tell you one of them though...
"I can't just push a button
To stop loving you"
i love that part... i wish it was true, i would've pushed that button a long time ago.
anyways... i love this poem. you're a very talented writer!
5/5

5/5! that is such an excellent but sooo sad poem. I feel like i have been there. Your poem is perfect. I loved every stanza. this one is my all-time fav>
"I feel like a knife
just stabbed me in my chest
you said you were different
but your just like the rest"

keep up your good work!

This one is one of my favorites<3
never stop writing poems because you are an amazing writer!

I Know How You Feel,

Some Poeple Say You Can Never Mend A Broken Heart But I Never Belived Mine Has Been Broken But I'm Fine. Well I Wish You Luck Even If I Don't Know You Or You have Never Had Your Heart Broken

-Kels