I can totally relate to this poem and i love the way you wrote it. Sometimes our whole outlook and something can be changed when were least expected nice job 5/5

"you snuck under my guard,and worked your way to my heart"
i love that!! beautiful use of words ..your poems always tell astory and thats what i love .great poem... once again. lisax

This is an amazing poem!
it reminds me of something that happened in my life.
i love it!

This is an amazing poem!
it reminds me of something that happened in my life.
i love it! especiallyy the last line "It only hurts when I breathe"
good work.