Well done.... you talent is showed in this poem... you have a talent... your all poems are so good. i also have already added you in my favourite liste

Cast shadows in the mind of loss, don't feel that I have gone
I've only slipped away to find a star to cry upon.

No comfort but the lonely night that greets my heart and soul
And tends the wounds that grips the mind within its gentle

^^^^
Oh Lordy Jeannie, these 2 couplets are just amazing. Your pen flows so brilliantly ... would you care to lend a little of that ink to a desperate soul, such as I?
Amazing write Auntie!

Take care
Luanne

This is such a sad poem. You have done a great job.

Just let me lose myself inside the darkness of your hold
As I heal from all the pain that's etched within my soul.

This really grabed my heart.
Take care Cindy

Wow I really liked this poem. You are very talented. Keep it up 5/5

It's fine about the Dani thing, just for future reference, lol. Anyway, thank you for the comment!! That means a lot to me!! This poem..... wow.... the imagery is crazy (in a really really good way)... this poem has a much deeper meaning behind the words, it's great. The flow and wording is beautiful. Great write.. even better read. Keep this up and you'll end up on my favorites list ^_^ 5/5
Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

You really feel the void of night's darkness falling all around. To dream of filling it see 'The Light Tonight'.

All the best,

S2S

Lovely and quite beautiful

Lovely...I really like to read you. I love the words you use...:)

Excellent poem ,wow , I wish I was that good, loved it :So come, my lonely night, lie with me as I sleep
And make my heart no promises that I know you cannot keep, love that, my life to a T, great job. your friend Tracy5/5

Exquisite poem....so many beautiful lines...

5/5

Fell upon this one, now I'm drawn in. An excelletnt write!

Great job full of passion and meaning

laura

This piece gave me absolute shilvers and goosebumps - its brilliant! So dark and sad but enchanting at the same time. I absolutely LOVED these lines:

But scattered in the darkness of the night I cannot see
The star that's saw me crying for the dawn to set me free.

But even more I loved the ending - how you ask the night not to make promises to your heart that it cannot keep. Just beautiful.

These words nearly drew me off the end of my seat while I read them.

Very good poem.

Mo
xx

Great poem.
So sad.
Great flow and nice rhyming.

" Just let me lose myself inside the darkness of your hold
As I heal from all the pain that's etched within my soul. "

My favourite lines.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Great poem, the words lowed nicly
5/5
r/c bk

Ending is not so strong as it could be. A magnificent peice, regardless.

Ending is not so strong as it could be. A magnificent peice, regardless.

Oh my goodness.. what an incredible poem. Truly magnificent. xx

Although sad but great one

Beautiful poem .... reminds me of someone

deserves another comment!! from me
well done!!