Are u sure?

by XXXrusted silverXXXwas nvr good enough to be goldXXX   Feb 26, 2007


It hurts to much to think right now,
It hurts to much to breathe,
I think I'm loosing myself at last,
I can't do anything but scream.

An inner battle fought within lost salvation,
No values too hold on to,
Needs no savior, time, or concentration,
there's nothing anyone can do.

When the last that's left has fallen,
and nothing more worth keeping exists,
and it all come down to barely living,
all's left is wish of eternal bliss.

Sweet release can only come to those who aren't in need,
unless it's found by ones own action,
But can u be sure at the last minute of your life,
you'll be able to commit this scary transaction.

Of your life for nothing but being gone,
are you sure it's what you need,
maybe just maybe you can last a lil longer,
watching yourself bleed.

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  • 16 years ago

    by jasumin amai

    Wow...really nice poem..lots of emotion 2 it...I really enjoyed reading it...

    YaZeE*....

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    I've felt like this before I think that's why I liked it so much because I could definitly relate nice poem

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    I loved this. your poems show such power. i loved the words you chose. perfect

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    Wow, incredible poem. I especially love the first stanza. It was an emotion that i can really relate to.
    Great job.

    *too hold on to*
    should be
    *to hold onto*
    5/5
    ~stephen white

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written i think and it show tru emotion keep it up and thanks for my comments

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