Well written i think and it show tru emotion keep it up and thanks for my comments

Wow, incredible poem. I especially love the first stanza. It was an emotion that i can really relate to.
Great job.

*too hold on to*
should be
*to hold onto*
5/5
~stephen white

I loved this. your poems show such power. i loved the words you chose. perfect

much love and many kisses,
bex

I've felt like this before I think that's why I liked it so much because I could definitly relate nice poem

Wow...really nice poem..lots of emotion 2 it...I really enjoyed reading it...

YaZeE*....