Comments : Lost In Confusion

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Cathy this piece tears at my heart. As you've stated "I know this poem don't rhyme but I just wrote what I'm feeling".
    Cathy it is writes like these that hit the reader with impact and leave a lasting memory.
    Many of us write to express ourself and many of us write to heal. And many time without even realizing we have done so .... we help others realize ...they are not alone. And that someone else shares those same painful feelings.
    You have released many emotions in this piece and you have also ...Released the Voice Within ...(R.T.V.W)

    I love you but do you honestly think its going to be that easy
    I know I took you back so many times before
    but can you pace together a broken glass
    when theres cracks in the middle that are so obvious
    ^^^
    My favorite stanza!

    Take care deary
    Luanne

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cathy
    These are the feelings coming straight from your heart. The ones that bring tears :( Hope things get better for you real soon.

    So what should I do? what path should I take
    should I go down the only road I ever known
    or should I start a new one that may have bumps and boundaries in the way
    but will it hurt me

    Life is so full of pain, I think this makes us stronger. The bumps help to build our characters. You seem to be on the right track.
    Take Care Cindy