Cathy this piece tears at my heart. As you've stated "I know this poem don't rhyme but I just wrote what I'm feeling".
Cathy it is writes like these that hit the reader with impact and leave a lasting memory.
Many of us write to express ourself and many of us write to heal. And many time without even realizing we have done so .... we help others realize ...they are not alone. And that someone else shares those same painful feelings.
You have released many emotions in this piece and you have also ...Released the Voice Within ...(R.T.V.W)
I love you but do you honestly think its going to be that easy
I know I took you back so many times before
but can you pace together a broken glass
when theres cracks in the middle that are so obvious
^^^
My favorite stanza!
Cathy
These are the feelings coming straight from your heart. The ones that bring tears :( Hope things get better for you real soon.
So what should I do? what path should I take
should I go down the only road I ever known
or should I start a new one that may have bumps and boundaries in the way
but will it hurt me
Life is so full of pain, I think this makes us stronger. The bumps help to build our characters. You seem to be on the right track.
Take Care Cindy