by Sabree Feb 26, 2007
category :
Life, society /
about society
Fearfull eyes glance |
by Michelle
I liked it. I especially enjoyed the rythm, or structure anyway, on how you built it. The way it's formatted gives the reader a sort of blunt, frustrated tone. I also liked how you expressed the feeling of being misunderstood, pre-judged with out justification, the human flaw of judgment in itself. Good read |