by Im In Love What Can I Say Feb 26, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
You say things that make me think a lot |
by Gem
I like this one cos the flow is very tidy and it allows the rhythm to come to life |
by Liz
Ooh. This poem was so sweet. I don't know what to say. The structure was good...loved the rhyming. Loved the whole thing!! An amazing write! Keep writing! And thanks A LOT for your comments! 5/5! |
by x.Athame.x
Very nice. This is a really sweet poem, and I can relate. :) *5/5 |