Heh, again something i think people can relate to...kinda.
The only critique i would say is that it was a bit long, but besides that it was good.
Liked it.
Keep it up
-Black night-

Oh, thats it, was scrolling down for more poems. Thought they were all brilliant, Could relate to quite a few of them. You'll be on my favs, no doubt.
Keep up the good work, looking forward to your next one.
-Black night-