A path beyond the fog

by Mona   Feb 26, 2007


I know there is a path
Covered with dust
But my hate and my wrath
Won't allow me to trust
The one that can lead me there
Through the fog that reduces my vision
To the path I'll walk upon I swear
If not bothered by indecision

Now there is a trail
Of damp footprints on the floor
Slowly my face turns pale
And I realize it doesn't matter anymore
For the one to trust is gone now
He stepped into the fog with a clear vision
There he found his path somehow
And left as if making his final decision

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    by Emma

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    by Paul

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