My dad 2

by lost and incomplete   Feb 26, 2007


You never seem to care
you just keep on going
breaking me

your smashing a smashed mirror

it doesn't work
you don't care

your grinding my happiness to dust
you just keep on going
until theres nothing left

you shrink my feelings to the size of a ant
all thats left is anger,depression
you squash the ant
its dead

and the sad thing is
your just being you
you don't know your doing it

killing me

grinding me

smashing me

suffocating me

the sad thing is

that

your my dad

*crap poem but i just needed to express myself*

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  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Not crap you should leave that part out! you expressed your self and thats all that matters. very well written and keep it up!

    nessa

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxy

    It's not crap!! As Long as it shows your expression It's an amazing poem. many people can relate to the bond with their father that you have. I love you!!
    xoxo kiss!! Kepp it up babe!!

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