Another day,
Another tear,
Another month,
Another year.
Another year since you left
And stole my heart like a thief.
Another night drunk in the bar
Another crush with my car.
Another wound on my hand
Another river of blood that has no end.
Another morning sober up
Another question from a cop.
Another infusion in my vein
My mothers tears, another pain.
Another voice in my head,
"Why did you do it?" "It was great!"
Another try to write you letter
Another fail "Next will be better"
Another day, a tear too
Another wish for another you.
Short but sweet. Liked the pace and rythm in this one.
"Another wish for another you" this line captivated the poem. We all feel like this, you captured the feeling of loss.
5/5
Keep it up
-Black night-