No One

*It this great big world,*
change to
*in
or this great big world*
it's

and

*There is not one person who would,
Miss me if I was dead,*

no comma between would and the new line.

Good job, and i could relate to the meaning.
Nice freeverse again, at least how i read it. I liked this one, but the last poem i read was better. Good job, once again.

5/5
~Stephen White

Nicely penned emotional poem and i have been ther and even though you say no onme would miss you people would even those you dont know

It this great big world,
There is not one person who would,
Miss me if I was dead,

after listneing these words a tear come from my eyes. how sad this is... i realy understand these feelings.. its like a deepest ocean and there is your heart. very deeply written. and i saved you poem cuz i will show this to who i love. i will also let her know that how much i miss her and what is my life without her.. you are already in my favourites list.. your wrk is gr8... take care

There is always some one you can turn to for help, and there would be people who would miss you, is so sad that you think that way, but if you want to talk im here! love steoh

This definitley a very realatable piece. I think everyone feels this way at one point or another. Great write! 5/5

marcella