by Oceansoul Feb 26, 2007
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Most lines are about 8 syllables, altough some are more, the third from last syllable from the 4th line of each stanza rhymes with the stanza's last syllable, |
by Dennise
Well my friend u have done it again!!! perfection achieved, bliss and sensuality is acute and serene, i feel every word all the way deep into my soul, wonderful work dont ever quit on your giftt...ever...email me sumtime just to know how u r doing... ok!!! ; ) |
by Jade
So much description. Your really talented. I love this poem..Its like hope, for when your feeling sh.itty. |
by Mo
This was a marvel to the senses! The smells, the sights, the wonderment at all new things bright and carefree, leaving behind all thats dark and supressed. Good work. |