Dipping in the darkness from the moon that's shining bright
Swirling at the dusty path that scans the Milky Way
Scattering the stars that Mother Nature has displayed.
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I loved these lines, they described to me the Milky Way in my mind, I also loved this poem, it's different but I loved it. Amazing poem, keep up the great work 5/5

Such wonderful imagery that really stirs the imagination. the very first line conjurs up such a vivid picture. Well done!

This flows great, excellent work.

I like this poem............

I hope or rather I think that I'm one among those who have hearts that dare to dream. I've been called a dreamer one to many time. I take it as a complement every time. Are you left handed. Just curious. love this poem. perfect rhyme and rythem. 5/5