Sweet Unspoken Love

by Michelle18   Feb 26, 2007


Such a soft voice that's filled with love
When you speak I become undone
Eagerly waiting to hear it constantly
Emerging from this voice that's haunting me
Tenderly waiting to hear your voice.

Untold words but I know you feel love
Not yet met but you're the one I'm thinking of
Silently fear not being with you
Possessing a love I never knew
Openly waiting to see your face
Keep telling myself this isn't a mistake
Everlasting thoughts crowd my mind
Neverending this love of mine.

Your Love......
Loss for words but they're in my heart
Only wishing we never part
Visibly imagining us together
Ending this poem with my words forever.

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  • 16 years ago

    by LiveMyLifeOnALullaby

    "When you speak I become undone."
    hmmm. amazing writing. (: it captured how you really feel about the one you love. beautifully written!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow I loved this. Your words and emotions were so beautiful and I couldnt help but smile while reading this because it reminded me of my love. The last stanza was the perfect way to end your poem. Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Courtney Lang

    Fabulous poem!

    i absolutely love it.
    the rhyming is really good.
    it definitely captured my attention.
    i love the emotions you put into it
    as well. =]. thanks for commenting mine!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bug1219

    Its very clear that your a such a talented writer and i love this one it was just so awesome! i loved it 5/5
    -Michelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Such an excellent poem, the vocab and the flow were great as well as the imagery. Sometimes just hearing the voice of the person we love is enough to make it by, even if only for a few hours. Excellent write 5/5 GG23

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