Well done. I especially like the way you ended it. 5/5

Wow.. haha I don't think i've read a poem about that before. I really enjoyed it. Your word choice was very good. The flow and rhymes were both lovely. I think you did a really great job writing this. Keep it up!

Keep writing!
Cayce

Nice. how do you rhyme? does it just come natural. well im off to find your other works you listed in your about me thing.