Comments : These Words

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is really beautiful.

    The blessed sun shines down on us,
    Bringing us wishes of love to use,
    Guiding us each day to follow,
    The words of I love you.

    This sums it up so nicely.
    Excellent!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    My fingers fit finely in-between your hand,
    Our hands are wrapped around each others hearts,
    Capable of anything, to love or to break,
    But in truth we shall never depart

    what a beautiful stanza...ur complete poem took me away with it but this stanza just blew me away...great write indeed

    all the best and take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    My fingers fit finely in-between your hand,
    Our hands are wrapped around each others hearts,

    your poem shows the dep love. ur wrk is gr8 i liked those lines allot