Beautiful poem. who is it about. anyone u've told me about. is this ur step sis bf. great poem. as usual you rock. also i know u say the girl is their but it doesnt matter i can always supress it. she doesn't belong. im sorry if i sound wierd or different but i just can't go on. 5/5

Kristi, I loved this one. I read it on the contest page and I had HAD HAD to come and comment on it. Some of the rhyme is a little off, but the story line and flow make up for it. Great job and I'm worried that I have competition. c[:
easy 5/5
Ciao

This poem is exactly wat i am going through rightn ow and it actually made me cry honestly im bawling this poem is absolutly amazing and i feel your pain!!!