Do I Know You?

by Brittney Follett   Feb 27, 2007


I see you everyday.
But do I know you?
I'm with you all the time,
And know what you do.

I know all your secrets.
I know when you lie.
I'm staying with you,
Even until I die.

I know your fave color,
But do I know your heart?
Not knowing you will...
Eventually rip us apart.

I know your laugh,
I know your smile.
I'll sometimes hate you,
For a little while.

Some say you never change...
You're changing every year.
But the last time I saw you,
Was when I looked in the mirror.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I liked the twist at the end, as if you've been standing there while I was reading, talking to yourself in the mirror, lol ok maybe not exactly liked that. Anyway, I really didn't expect it. As always great flow too. & Kudos for you for being different lol, keep them wondering... great write. 5/5

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Vanessa

    Always dare to be diffrent. This poem is as unique as you are. Excellent show of emtion, deep, and the flow is wonderful. Excellent job once again.

  • 17 years ago

    by AlaSkA

    Pretty good write here.
    i was thinking that this was a little elementry, untill i read the last stanza. it blew me away. (;

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    I Love the twist, very clever. When I first started reading this, I thought you were ta;ling about aboyfriend..then the surprise ending. Greatj ob. Hope you got an A, you do from me!

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Different is always good! :] I loved the twist in the ending. I, too, thought it was about someone you loved. I loved the title. It really captured me. It flowed really well, and had great meaning behind it!

    Beautiful, darlin'.

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