by lisa Feb 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
My dad walked down the path. |
by XxJennyxX
Wow! what a beautiful poem, very touching. Well done xxx |
by Sunshine
Beautiful and heartfelt write |
by njabulo b
WOW!!! it so fantastic and it talking, it beautiful. |
by lizzle
Dude i had to hold back my tears!!its a great poem.well written!!!im giving it a 5/5 |
Omg!!....soo touching and powerful poem hun.........it was sweet yet mixed with a bit of sad emotion.....i so hp u r feeling better nw(if this is true)....great imagery too...Greatly penned..it pulled me deep into narrator's situation.lovely poem!..kp up the good work! |