Oh my god...I'm sat here in floods of tears...and it's rare that a poem can bring me to tears.
Wow..this was so damn sad, yet so beautifully written.
I think it hit me so hard 'cause I have a little sister.
I'm so sorry is this is true.
I thought it flowed very well and the imagery was breathtaing.
Such a wonderful write on such a tragic topic.

Oh so much love. so nice to read. i am happy and have a smile on my face. thank you. yes yes. i trully thank you for sharing this poem with me.

5/5 David

Hey hun this was a very touching poem. so much emotion coming through. thank u so much for ur comment on my poem. meant alot. xx

Omg... that had me tears, it was so bittersweet and so heartbreakingly beautiful...
I wish i had the words to make you feel a little better..
Thank you for the comment
5/5
*gem*

Omg!!....soo touching and powerful poem hun.........it was sweet yet mixed with a bit of sad emotion.....i so hp u r feeling better nw(if this is true)....great imagery too...Greatly penned..it pulled me deep into narrator's situation.lovely poem!..kp up the good work!
xxPoojaxx

Dude i had to hold back my tears!!its a great poem.well written!!!im giving it a 5/5
-lisa

WOW!!! it so fantastic and it talking, it beautiful.

Beautiful and heartfelt write

Wow! what a beautiful poem, very touching. Well done xxx