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by Jenni Marie Feb 27, 2007 category : Love, romance / lost love
Clutched in the boy's fist His mother did find A note saying 'I love her But I'm losing m mind.' While besides that young girl Was another letter as well The words written full of emotion That was easy to tell. ''I love him dearly But he does not know I keep my feelings hidden My emotions don't show. I thought I could deal Guess I was wrong Can't stay here This love is too strong. I tried to be just friends Harder than I thought Can't handle the pain That this love has brought. I love him dearly But he does not know I'm sorry for being weak But now I must go.'' If only those two had said How they really had felt They wouldn't have had to cope With all the pain that was dealt. Now it's too late Nothing they can do Killed themselves for love And left everyone blue. If only they had had the courage They would have been together Now there's just no chance Their love is buried forever
by Poeta
Wow, this is such a great poem, tis passionate, and I love it! Heartz
by ~yOu EnVy Me ~
Great poem keep it up 5/5
by lisa
I love it how theres always a 2nd part!! this is a true story as it does happen..beautifully written .well done 5/5 keep them coming hun