by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup Feb 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
We meet again, here today, gathered in this place. |
*Who felt all alone in a cold world of stone* beautiful line. Resonating and wonderfully penned. |
by Robie Lincer
Loved it! but it was soo sad! and very heartfelt... |
by Cella Bella
It's so sad and yet you wrote it beautifully. And yea the flow was alittle off at imes but, nonetheless it was great poem. 5/5 |
by Tricky Daze
It would be really great if you make it as stanzas,cos it's kinda hard to read,but other than that you really expressed yourself so good |
by firexdancer
It was really goergeous, so beautiful |