Oh my gosh jas, thats soo amazing, i know you love her, and i know she will do the right thing and pick you. okay, well i will see u later Jas, bye bye buddy

HEY SISTA well done i respect the equality in this maiden u seek..(thumbs up)i hope u find her...lol

Herro! Welp, all I have to say is..Jasey, you gowing cwasey! That's what I'm talkin' bout. Keep writing...especially poems related to the secret warrior princesscough QUEEN. Peace out playa!

Love ya
Jane

I've read this poem maybe 5 times now. I wouldn't change a thing..I love the gradual build up...the want, the hope, the determination, the battle, the certainty. You portray this woman in a beautiful light. Strong, but still feminine. Nicely written. 5/5

Loved this one Jas u are soo good at this, u r a true poet jas, lol mr intellectual

~dessie~

5/5 just wow. good work.. O_O very good.. its very interesting.. loved it.

Wow, all your poems flow so beautifully, 5/5 (again)
gabriella

OMG....this was like hor.. lol Just kidding! It's awesome. :-D Probably the longest poem I ever read in my lifetime, but I don't know, it's just deep. Whatever that is.. The point is, (not the real point but whatever) I liked it, no really it's a great poem. I just want to say, you're a really great poet and it's really truthful, I could actually almost hear you say the words. Hope you meet your princess some day! xoxo peace ~M

Omgshhhhh this is amazin,g so much intensity so much imagery...this flow is amazing greatt job...completly flawless.....

melissa