This Little Secret

by Cathy   Feb 27, 2007


I got a little secret that I keep all to myself
a sweet little secret meant for no body else
I want to shout out how good it makes me feel
But this little secret in my heart is safely sealed

I won’t tell, not until the right time
So just hold onto me tight, everything is fine
I need to know if you care about me, before I let you know
This secret I hold in that I can’t wait to let go

So look me in the eyes let me see what you feel
Kiss me on my lips; I want to know if it’s for real
Tell me that you love me and you will soon see
This secret I hold onto that sealed inside of me

Whisper in my ear how beautiful I am
Show me that you would like to be my only man
Than as you hold me I'll whisper in you ear
This precious little secret I hold onto so dear

You see I'm very close to telling you
But first let me say, you've done everything I wanted you to do
So here it goes maybe you already knew
but the secret I want to tell is I love you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    "I got a little secret that I keep all to myself
    a sweet little secret meant for no body else
    I want to shout out how good it makes me feel
    But this little secret in my heart is safely sealed"

    A trully perfect stanza.The flow was excellent and so was the way you worded it.

    A few typos in the rest of the poem and overusage of words in a line here and there threw me back a little. You somehow lost the rhythmn that you started in the first stanza.

    Overall a sweet poem. Hope I wasn't too harsh.

    Jeannie aka Twisted Heart

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Cathy
    Great job. I really enjoyed reading this piece.

    Whisper in my ear how beautiful I am
    Show me that you would like to be my only man
    Than as you hold me I'll whisper in you ear
    This precious little secret I hold onto so dear

    Take care Cindy

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