Cathy
Great job. I really enjoyed reading this piece.

Whisper in my ear how beautiful I am
Show me that you would like to be my only man
Than as you hold me I'll whisper in you ear
This precious little secret I hold onto so dear

Take care Cindy

"I got a little secret that I keep all to myself
a sweet little secret meant for no body else
I want to shout out how good it makes me feel
But this little secret in my heart is safely sealed"

A trully perfect stanza.The flow was excellent and so was the way you worded it.

A few typos in the rest of the poem and overusage of words in a line here and there threw me back a little. You somehow lost the rhythmn that you started in the first stanza.

Overall a sweet poem. Hope I wasn't too harsh.

Jeannie aka Twisted Heart