I NEED TO KNOW

by Destiny Marie Babyy   Feb 27, 2007


HOW CAN YOU DO THIS TO ME?
IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY, CAN'T YOU SEE?
I'VE LOVED YOU FOR SO LONG,
NOW IN RETURN, YOU'RE DOING ME WRONG.
WHAT DID I DO? WHAT DID I SAY,
TO MAKE YOU JUST WALK AWAY?
I HAVE TO KNOW BEFORE I GO MAD,
I'M TIRED OF FEELING DOWN AND SAD.
DO YOU HAVE A NEW LOVER?
WHAT HAVE YOU DISCOVERED?
DO YOU HONESTLY NOT CARE?
I THOUGHT WE HAD A LOVE THAT WAS RARE.
I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO DO.
I AM STILL IN LOVE WITH YOU.
PLEASE, TELL ME WHAT I'VE DONE WRONG.
I'M NOT SURE IF I CAN GO ON.
I'M SORRY IF I'VE HURT YOU IN ANY WAY,
I REALLY WISH YOU WOULD STAY.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Rahl The Layman Lord

    Good poem, good good...add a bit more complexity to a topic such as the one you chose to write on and i think you will see that your poem is greatly improved.

    -Jason-

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Very powerful and what a beqautiful rhyme..excel;ent work i dont kno why nop iones read ur stuff but i will give me a chance and one day i wil have read them all..excelletn job keep it up and i know how u feel....

    melissa

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