Very powerful and what a beqautiful rhyme..excel;ent work i dont kno why nop iones read ur stuff but i will give me a chance and one day i wil have read them all..excelletn job keep it up and i know how u feel....

melissa

Good poem, good good...add a bit more complexity to a topic such as the one you chose to write on and i think you will see that your poem is greatly improved.

-Jason-