Why Can't I Show The Real Me*

by lost in lovee   Feb 27, 2007


All the words
Hurt me inside.
All the pain I just want to hide.
All the tears just want to come out.
All the fears are deep in my thoughts.

No one will know
No one will ever see
Why I just can't show
The real me

I just want to tell someone ,
I just want everyone to see;
That on the outside
Isn't what I really want to be.

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  • 17 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    This is very good... one thing though. I know it sucks to be someone you arent...but at least on this site you CAN explain how you feel you know? Im here if you need anything!

  • 17 years ago

    by Annabel

    Most people feel like this at some point, i know i do! That was a really sad poem though, well done xxxx 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by LithiumSacrifice

    Well worded. to the point. simple. excellent. 5/5 liked it. i know what thats like.. im out of it now and i dont care =]

    take care you
    -linds[x]

  • 17 years ago

    by Perfection

    Wow I could find myself in this one... It was writen very well, the rhyming was good as well. The only thing i saw unfit were the 2 first lines...

    Never the less this poem was truly excelent so there is no doubt about the rating in my mind =).

    Take care ..

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