by LithiumSacrifice Feb 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
rekindled love
The Last Goodbye |
by Robie Lincer
Know how u feel there! |
A lot of emotion, but i love it! you are very talented! && i can relate a LOT to this poem~ |
Aw!! that was so good hun. your now a favourite of mine, i think your style is alot like mine. |
by GreyWolf
Good work. two very strong emotions [if not more] portrayed here. lovedd it |
by Fredy
Nicely written, if you make it more compact, if you put some lines together it will be better because it will have a more flow. otherwise, great. |