Wow, a lot of emotion in this little poem. you can definitley feel the hurt and frustration. Great write! 5/5

marcella

Yup just like the other person said "it has alot of emotion"...great job 5/5 keep it up.

Great job, this was an amazing write :] i really felt the emotion 5/5

This poem has a nice thought to it...
needs a li'l reforming with the lines
but i think its good

5/5
the thought carries well..
good luck
love
amy

Nicely written, if you make it more compact, if you put some lines together it will be better because it will have a more flow. otherwise, great.

Good work. two very strong emotions [if not more] portrayed here. lovedd it

Aw!! that was so good hun. your now a favourite of mine, i think your style is alot like mine.

much love and many kisses,
bex

A lot of emotion, but i love it! you are very talented! && i can relate a LOT to this poem~

Know how u feel there!
its hard... but always keep ur head up!
the poem was filled with sadness... amazing! keep it up!