Loves death

by Cherise   Feb 27, 2007


I walk into my bedroom
and sit on my bed
with that unpleasant e-mail stuck in my head.
How could you hide this away from me for so long?
You lost all my respect
My love for you is GONE.

I'm sitting here by myself
tears streaming down my face.
Thinking about the 5 months I just wasted
and i can never again replace.

You hurt me so much
nothing in this world can compare.
All the food I eat comes back up
The pills left me not all there.

Oh how i wish you could have saw me this way!
Then you could hurt to!
But again,when i think about it
I'm not like you.
I can't just throw aways someones feelings
and then just expect to perfectly start a new.

You destroyed all my confidence
To you ,I guess I'm not good enough
For all men, you have forever destroyed my trust.
You threw all my soul away
Just for one night of lust.

I hope your happy my dear
i can't say your love for me is real
but i can say one thing is certain
our relationship to me
is losing it's appeal.

I'm going to let you go now.
I'm going to to consider what you said.
But don't try to make me happy
Inside I'm already dead.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow was excellent- my opinion.
    The emotion was true.
    I thought this was penned wonderfuly
    well done.
    Elainex

  • 17 years ago

    by Startle Me

    The flow seems kind of rocky on this one
    A bit unbalanced...
    Also seems a bit forced
    But not a lot.
    It's probably just my imagination.
    But this thing seems more like a story
    Rather than a poem.
    Reading this..
    It's pretty good.
    It's not the best.
    But you can probably do better =]
    4/5?

  • 17 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    I love it, love it! It's fantastic how you just pretty much stabbed it onto the paper (or keyboard, if we're being literal =.=;)
    5/5, well done!

    P.S. Thankies for the wonderful comment! ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    I liked the emotion put into this poem, and I know how much being cheated on can hurt, and you really captured that well. I'm still unsure what you're planning to do, but I would love to see you and Wayne stick it out for a little while longer, because he really does love you, even though you dont think he does right now, and believe me, I wouldn't either, but he wouldnt have told you the truth if he didnt love you, he would have just broken up with you for her, or just kept it a secret,because obvisouly that worked for a while. But he was honest with you, and that has to count for something. Your relationship is never going to be the same again, but if he was really worth the five months you spent with him, it might be worth another shot. Just remember everything he said, how much he apologized, and how much he really loves you, even if you can't see it right now, then make the right decision for you, not for him or anyone else, and not for what you think you should do. I love you darling, and I hope the two of you can make it through this alright, whatever you decide.

  • 17 years ago

    by StJimmy

    Wow! that was so good. I have been through the same thing. keep rocking!

    (don't forget to check your spelling)

    St.Jimmy

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