Gr8 anger letter. i like how u screamed it right on paper. it grabed my eyes. lov is sad. keep writing:)

Wow! that was so good. I have been through the same thing. keep rocking!

(don't forget to check your spelling)

St.Jimmy

I liked the emotion put into this poem, and I know how much being cheated on can hurt, and you really captured that well. I'm still unsure what you're planning to do, but I would love to see you and Wayne stick it out for a little while longer, because he really does love you, even though you dont think he does right now, and believe me, I wouldn't either, but he wouldnt have told you the truth if he didnt love you, he would have just broken up with you for her, or just kept it a secret,because obvisouly that worked for a while. But he was honest with you, and that has to count for something. Your relationship is never going to be the same again, but if he was really worth the five months you spent with him, it might be worth another shot. Just remember everything he said, how much he apologized, and how much he really loves you, even if you can't see it right now, then make the right decision for you, not for him or anyone else, and not for what you think you should do. I love you darling, and I hope the two of you can make it through this alright, whatever you decide.

I love it, love it! It's fantastic how you just pretty much stabbed it onto the paper (or keyboard, if we're being literal =.=;)
5/5, well done!

P.S. Thankies for the wonderful comment! ^_^

The flow seems kind of rocky on this one
A bit unbalanced...
Also seems a bit forced
But not a lot.
It's probably just my imagination.
But this thing seems more like a story
Rather than a poem.
Reading this..
It's pretty good.
It's not the best.
But you can probably do better =]
4/5?

The flow was excellent- my opinion.
The emotion was true.
I thought this was penned wonderfuly
well done.
Elainex