I'm Not Alright

by Kristina   Feb 27, 2007


I'm not alright, I just pretend I am,
Inside my heart is slowing dying.
At night tears fall from my eyes,
Because of all the pain in my life.

I just need to start everything over,
Make a new beginning for me.
Don't let anything like this happen again,
Change the way I did things.

Find someone who will love me,
And that I will love in return.
Someone to be here forever,
Who will never ever hurt me.

But I can't change things,
If only I could then I'd be okay.
I just wish people weren't so cold,
And we could all just get along.

Copyright © February 27, 2007 - Kristina M

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  • 17 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    This poem is amazing! absolutely... no question about it. i like it because it seems like something ive been through

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    At night tears fall from my eyes,
    *at night the tears...*

    that is just a syllable addition suggeston, make it flow better.

    *
    I just need to start everything over,
    Make a new beginning for me.
    Don't let anything like this happen again,
    Change the way I did things.
    *

    that whole stanza is kinda... rough... Iffy, if you know what i mean. it is well written, but i feel it was a little forced.
    Good job though.
    5/5
    ~stephen white

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    It creates a really sad image which is good it is very emoitional and vivid i guess is the word. well well well done

  • 17 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, this is so sad, hope your ok!
    It creates a really sad image in my mind, which is both good and bad!
    well done, 5/5 from me!
    Steph

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Great poem! I love when I ca really "feel" the emotion along with the writter. And you made that very easy with a great piece. 5/5

    marcella

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