Whos dad?

by RayRay   Apr 6, 2004


Where you at dad?
when you gonna come around
this is your son dad looking at you with eyes so sad
wish you was here dad where you at dad?
you missed out on my life dad
Hope it makes you sad dad
but I'm not gonna stay mad forever dad
you might not be around dad
but when its your time to be in the ground dad
who's gonna be there with tears dad?
your son dad? don't think so dad
I'm tired of these tears dad
wishing u was here dad
thats how i use to feel dad
but since you wasn't never around dad
i guess i don't have a dad
so this poem is to a dad who was never a dad so i guess these words want make you sad dad or mad dad cause your not a dad at least not my dad. goodbye stranger I'm not trying to say I'm leaving you because you cant leave someone you never new so to the dad i don't know or the dad i don't have. this poem is to you

(this poem doesnt really flow togeather that good but it came from the heart so i guess thats all that matters)

-Ray Richardson-

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  • 19 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Thats great
    sorry if its true !!
    i love it
    my poems aobut my dad
    if u want to check them out
    GReAt JOb!
    5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by jennifer cheng

    heyy
    if dis poem ish true... well i feel for u i dunt hab a real dad either its hard tho i juSs wish dat i could aleast see him once juSs once n ill be happy but i juss gueSs its not meant tew be well i hope ur dad comes tew see u through ur life aite best in life aite peace outt

  • 20 years ago

    by Michelle

    Great poem by you again. Sry for wut your feelin. Keep up tha good work

  • 20 years ago

    by Katryna

    Your right, all that matters is that it came from the heart! Look, if you EVER wanna talk~ hit me up at~ Baby_K_0130@yahoo.com~ and we can just chat. You don't know me, but I know what your going through. TRUST ME! Well, I really lk you poem and I think you should keep up the good work!

  • 20 years ago

    by hana

    it dont matter if it has no flow a word from the heart is better than a word from your mind...becuz your mind is foolish and can be fooled but your heart lways speaks the truth

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