it dont matter if it has no flow a word from the heart is better than a word from your mind...becuz your mind is foolish and can be fooled but your heart lways speaks the truth

Your right, all that matters is that it came from the heart! Look, if you EVER wanna talk~ hit me up at~ Baby_K_0130@yahoo.com~ and we can just chat. You don't know me, but I know what your going through. TRUST ME! Well, I really lk you poem and I think you should keep up the good work!

Great poem by you again. Sry for wut your feelin. Keep up tha good work

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if dis poem ish true... well i feel for u i dunt hab a real dad either its hard tho i juSs wish dat i could aleast see him once juSs once n ill be happy but i juss gueSs its not meant tew be well i hope ur dad comes tew see u through ur life aite best in life aite peace outt

Thats great
sorry if its true !!
i love it
my poems aobut my dad
if u want to check them out
GReAt JOb!
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