Wow....you are good!! i really liked it... yu have a gift, and a way with words... keep it up... let the world hear your strong voice

and by the way.... no my poem was about a couple who had sex and the rubber tore so they prayed they werent prego

Hah hah.
What you wrote was still funny.
Anywayz, thank you for the
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This was pretty good but...I dunno, in between the good lines and appropriate wording there was a few words/lines that seemed off. But it was still good. Well done.

You have a serious gift, never stop writing.. Most people try to do that but they end up sounding all the same, but you have your own original style to say something everyone else was trying to say...
-Keep writing

Hey... this poem is great... keep up the good work... xD

I love the poem, it is so true and so many people are like this, i liked the vocab you used, little bits seemed forced but mainly amazing, well done!!

I loved the words once again there always so greatly used! you did an excellent job I loved it!