by Michael D Nalley Feb 28, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
My time is near I feel I have been bled dry |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
Wow. i liked this depth and flow and rhyming. nice job. my favorite stanza: |
by Kristina
Excellent job on writing this. it flowed nicely. i enjoyed reading it. 5/5 |
I really like the topic you wrote about, everything about it was so true. I agree with everything you said. The flow and rhyme were both very good. This had a very good meaning in it. Great job! I really loved it! |