Comments : Change; For the Better

  • 17 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    You really amazed me with your poems, you know what i will put you on my favorite ^-^

  • 17 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow, that is amazing! I seriously opened my mouth in shock as I read the last stanza. Very inspiring and.. wow. I'm in awe. Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Romancing the Darker Side

    This is a great poem, it has a fabulous story behind it. Althought he flow was a tad off in some spots, I still give it a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this poem, it made me want to cry.. but, I smiled instead. People like that are what make this life worth living,e h.

    The description, emotion and flow was incredible, and it almost had a rhythm to it.
    The ending was great, just as usual.

    Great job, hun
    keep it up.
    5/5