When's the last time you said
you loved me so much?
When's the last time I felt
your soft and loving touch?
We're growing apart,
it's happening too fast.
I don't want to loose you
I'm trying onto you to grasp.
You don't look into my eyes no more
and you don't gently touch my face.
And when we kiss nowadays
I don't longer feel as if I'm in a daze.
Our love was so strong
it was the most amazing thing ever.
I can't imagine us going our separate ways
I always thought we'd last forever.
baby I will fight,
I want us to stay together.
We have to make it work again,
because with you the world is better.
I know you still love me,
I'm still in love with you too.
We can't let our love die
I still need you by my side baby boo.
Love!!!! this poem.....
You're heaps talented ay...
Just a quick tip,
Use stanza's... People find it alot easier to read... Basically just break your poem up into blocks of 4lines....