You tell the truth my friend but there are always ppl who offer help. u may not realize but many things are happening unseen... only certain ppl can even sence, only because they are so freaken busy with there day to day life, if only they were to listen they would hear the voices that call as well

i gave u a 5/5 cuz i liked the flow and choice of words.. keep it up

The first stanza was amazing I loved it. it was pure brilance! great job this poem was really good so far from what I've read your best nice work